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"SOUL DON'T YOU DARE!" soul hopped up off the ground "too late."

Soul nonchalantly strolled into the women's restroom getting a book thrown at him he ducked quickly letting the book hit the floor with a thump he was getting good with this book dodging thing "soo this is what the women's  bathroom looks li-.." he was forced to shut up mid-sentence due to Maka had another book out "WHAT THE HELL WHERE DO YOU KEEP GETTING THESE FROM!?!" Maka ignored his comment "Makaaa-CH-"

Soul grabbed her arm before she could do extreme damage to his skull "now Maka you said I was an idiot do you really think giving me brain damage will help that?" she blushed  "Let go of my arm soul and while you're at it GET OUT OF THE WOMENS BATHROOM." Soul shook his head at her "and leave you in here to sulk I don't think so Maka." pouting she replied "I wasn't sulking!" she pried her wrist from his hold and slumped against one of the walls slowly sliding down it soul Laughed at her then sat down next to her.

***************Maka pov (hahah you thought I forgot did you? Well I DIDN'T!)**********

Maka glared at the boy sitting next to her "What are you laughing about stupid?" Soul smirked "Ohh nothing!" Maka growled at him "You may be stupid but you're not insane and only insane people laugh at nothing so tell me."

Soul looked down at her fondly "Your blushing" he winked "THAT'S BECAUSE YOUR PISSING ME OFF PERVERT!" Soul simply laughed "so it wouldn't bother you if I did this?" he ran his fingers over her cheek lightly and in response a cute red blush spread itself out upon her cheek she quickly swatted his hand away "Don't touch me I'm mad at you right now!" she spat at him but her perked up "So does that mean I can touch you later?" he smirked… for ¼ a second "Maka-CHOP!!!" Soul was now sprawled out on the floor whimpering a large book impression forever tattooed on his skull "GEZUS I WAS KIDDING and where do you keep getting these books from!?" Maka smirked "I have my resources." Soul shot back with a… almost snide comment "Yah you shove them up your-" Maka glared at him "….I will shut up now."
lol sorry it took me so long to post this chapter...and that it is super short TT.TT so sorry any wayyy lol lil fluffy here ;D oh soul i wouldent finish that sentence XD
Remember Faves are respected and Reviws are Love and if you really like this story and you do both I will be your writing slave!
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Prat 5: [pending]
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YunaKozue Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2014
Please write the next chapter. Pleaaaaseeeee Blanc Embarrassed Icon 
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therealdjpon3 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
2 years man 2
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kittykat11458 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014
Please continue I would really like to know what happens next.😉😉😉😁😁😁😊😊😊😇😇😇❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
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kykytiger Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Pending?! PENDING!? This is the second time TODAY!
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Nikkipie110 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
When is chapter 5 coming out??? i really love this story soulXmaka
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fire-red-demon Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013
i must read more i like this story
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Nessie20011 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Student Writer
When is chapter 5 coming out?
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SoulEaterLover123123 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Laughing at the end. I will shut up now! LOL
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:iconmissraz:
MissRaz Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Student General Artist
aww ty im so glad it made you laugh :)
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aedan0896 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013
Loved it "MissRaz" but you havent put up the 5th chapter yet, how am i supposed to fave the 5th chaper? i mean ik how it ends but still.
lol, jkjk, love ya girly... but seriously, post it soon XD <3
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cuteone53 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012
this is such an awesome story! please write more :D lol i love the ending oh soul u so stupid XD
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SoMaluver Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012
"Yeah you shove them up your-"
"I will shut up now"
LOL!! AMAZING!! So funny! Continue please! I want to keep reading!!
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:iconmissraz:
MissRaz Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Student General Artist
im writing the next chappy now im glad you like it so much ^~^
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SoMaluver Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012
Good, send me a link to it when you've finished! I want to be one of the first many people to read it! ^_^
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:iconmissraz:
MissRaz Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Student General Artist
I will be sure to do that! ^~^
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SoMaluver Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012
Thank you! :)
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:iconmissraz:
MissRaz Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Student General Artist
No problem ^^
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:iconsomaluver:
SoMaluver Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012
^_^
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Lanni-chan Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
"Yah you shove them up your-" Maka glared at him "….I will shut up now." XDDD You kill me!! where do you get all of this humor?!?!
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:iconmissraz:
MissRaz Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Student General Artist
lol i have a box that tells me pervy and funny things in my brain XD
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Mimzic Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
When are you going to post ? <3 I wanna know what happens hehe :iconnlickplz:
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:iconmissraz:
MissRaz Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Student General Artist
as soon as my writers block goes away lol im sorry there is no excuse for how late it is :iconotlplz: hopefully i will stop being so lazy and get a new chappy posted
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Mimzic Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconsadfaceplz:
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:iconmissraz:
MissRaz Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Student General Artist
i will get it up within this week hopefully
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KKBossa Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
awwww so cute :squee:
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:iconmissraz:
MissRaz Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Student General Artist
lol thank you :3
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:iconkkbossa:
KKBossa Featured By Owner May 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
no probz ;P
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Titanairbenderpony Featured By Owner May 5, 2012  Student Digital Artist
hahahahh oh soul XD
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:iconmissraz:
MissRaz Featured By Owner May 7, 2012  Student General Artist
lol thats soul for ya :D
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princessminight Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Student Writer
lol that has to hurt
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:iconmissraz:
MissRaz Featured By Owner May 2, 2012  Student General Artist
lol what has to hurt?
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princessminight Featured By Owner May 3, 2012  Student Writer
the maka chop
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kimicat108 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lmaooooo i love his so much :'DDDD
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:iconmissraz:
MissRaz Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Student General Artist
lol thank you :)
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FallenAngelGM Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012
Loll, yeah that last sentence would have killed him FOR GOOD! Great story!!! :D
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MissRaz Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Student General Artist
XD he wouldent wake up after that chop Thanks :D
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